07-21-2025, 05:03 PM
I was not expecting to like Terms & Conditions, as the premise was doing nothing for me since I'm still hung up on my girlfriend x one boyfriend at a time, but yeah, that was really, really well done and i have taken my pursed moue of knee-jerk judgement and thrown it out a window. that was delicious!
really enjoyed their dynamic, very particularly the interactions over Rafayel's Secret Room Of Remembrance and Sylus' near helpless slavering to get into it at the start. it just goes to show that it doesn't actually matter what the fanfiction is about really, its how its written that makes it compelling.
E G G S slapped me in the face with a slimy fish too. I was... not expecting that and then I couldn't get away - /picture me desperately trying to claw my way out of pit of quicksand. wow. some people should be fed all the chocolate cake just for the sheer braggadocio of the whole thing.
I somehow missed the paragraph about Siren's Call and Takedown, did you add that in afterwards as an addendum? I inhaled those over a snifter of ... cookies and cream ice cream because sunday was World Ice Cream Day and who am i to miss such a festive event. the dialogue in Takedown was incredibly spot on, I fell into Rafayel's voice immediately in my head and it was perfect the entire way.
really enjoyed their dynamic, very particularly the interactions over Rafayel's Secret Room Of Remembrance and Sylus' near helpless slavering to get into it at the start. it just goes to show that it doesn't actually matter what the fanfiction is about really, its how its written that makes it compelling.
E G G S slapped me in the face with a slimy fish too. I was... not expecting that and then I couldn't get away - /picture me desperately trying to claw my way out of pit of quicksand. wow. some people should be fed all the chocolate cake just for the sheer braggadocio of the whole thing.
I somehow missed the paragraph about Siren's Call and Takedown, did you add that in afterwards as an addendum? I inhaled those over a snifter of ... cookies and cream ice cream because sunday was World Ice Cream Day and who am i to miss such a festive event. the dialogue in Takedown was incredibly spot on, I fell into Rafayel's voice immediately in my head and it was perfect the entire way.
