Caleb - fanfic going.. somewhere
#1

I have an idea. There's a whole middle section and ending and stuff.  Not sure how to get from this to the rest of it, but I'll figure it out.




He consoles himself that it could be worse.

Twenty minutes ago, he’d been shoulder deep in a substation panel, scraping everything and his knuckles trying to reach the last set of clips with his face mashed against the control board and trying desperately not to lose an eye. Now all he has to do is stand and look attentive if anybody glances his way, datapad at the ready to record whatever orders are thrown out so his Commander doesn’t have to dirty himself with a touchscreen. His priority is reduced now to ‘don’t bleed anywhere obvious’.

‘Join the Fleet!’ the cheerful poster had shouted. We could use a man like you, said the recruiting officer. Take mankind into the future, affirmed the acceptance letter. All he’d really cared about was two years of not having to pay a single split chip to anybody, a place to be that was far away from everything and more importantly everyone, and since he’d signed onto a Deepspace ship he’d come out of it with a very tidy new life, assuming he came out at all. A risk, admittedly, that had seemed rather abstract back at boot camp.

Nobody had told him that he’d be on the hook to the entire third shift Maintenance crew for the rest of his natural born life through a series of mishaps that take on the qualities of myth the more he broods about it. Or that they’d be more than happy to shave bare slivers of cred off the mountain of his debt in return for the occasional offering of blood to whatever greater power Maintenance believes in. So what if he had long arms. So what if they were also skinny and perfect for junction sections. Being yanked around by his dress tabs had really not been in his career plans.

He shifts his weight from one leg to the other and keeps his eyes trained on the opposite wall, trying hard to ignore the throbbing aches from where he lost skin. It's unfortunate that he’s on current rotation as adjunct to the second shift Commander which makes him both easy to find and easy to grab, as adjuncting mostly means running around doing whatever he’s told to do and standing around when he’s not. His dress uniform sleeve is probably welded by now to his sluggishly bleeding scrapes like the world’s most expensive bandage. At least the jacket is dark and nobody is going to look that close anyways.

He’ll say one thing for the new chain of command; nobody is late or missing to this suddenly scrambled briefing save for the person that called it. Every seat has a body in it including third shift, and every body has its adjunct behind it ready to record orders and notes. There’s even a hastily laid beverage service thrown together on the tactical table at the back bulkhead although his senior officer hasn’t asked for anything and a quick glance around confirms that nobody else is relaxed enough to want to wet their anything either.

Maybe it’s more than nobody wants a hot liquid close to hand considering how some of these briefings have gone in the last little while since the shuffle up. Nobody’s really talking but Sinton’s drumming his fingertips loudly enough on the arm of his chair to make up for it.

When the new Colonel sweeps in soundlessly some long minutes later, he straightens from the aching half slump he’d fallen into and everybody not already standing does so; some of them so slowly it’s like watching the sun rise. The Colonel doesn’t seem to notice or care at the near disrespect.

If you ask him, although nobody is going to, this new Colonel ought to go straight back to the Academy until he can at least grow a beard. Xia doesn’t look old enough to be in charge of anything larger than a drink order, let alone the point Fleetship. Sure, the uniform fits the man well enough and there’s enough braiding to choke a large animal if he wanted to, but that’s true of every senior officer in this room and it’s not like a Wanderer is going to hold still while the man drops a golden noose around its neck.

The last run they’d been on, wagtalk had it the Colonel had fucked up his orders to the Mech stations and nearly lost them into a sideslip before they’d managed to turn it around and limp back to HQ. They’ve been on the ground for weeks now, ostensibly doing repairs but everyone has been holding their breath for another command change. Most of the smart money was on Pember to get shuffled over, but he’d gone for the dark horse of Turozo to come back. If it paid off, he could get most of the way clear of Maintenance and if it didn’t, well he’d be no worse off than before.

Yet Xia’s still calling meetings out of nowhere that everybody has to stand around for.

It’s only when the Colonel sits without more than a sweeping glance over everybody’s head, and those ranked enough to get their own chairs go back down again, that the slight figure hidden behind him until that moment becomes apparent. Just off his right shoulder and back, the precise placement for where his aide would stand - if Colonel Xia had an aide.

Which he doesn’t. He’d been three hours into command before he got rid of the one he’d been given and had replaced them with precisely nobody. The rumors had run through the corridors of the Adamant like rabid metal mice and they’d only gotten louder since. He does everything himself. He answers only to HQ and only occasionally to his communicator. The command deck is locked when he’s on it, bridge crew only. He’s not even in touching distance of the crew most of the time.

Yet, there she is, looking like she’d rather melt through the floor and fidgeting at his elbow. She’s wearing the right uniform, sure, and she’s in the right place but she’s… the tiniest little thing he’s ever seen. She’s probably barely over Xia’s shoulder when he stands and right now, if the Colonel looks sideways, he’s going to be staring right at her tits. He didn’t even know they made uniforms in that size.

He’s not the only one gawping. Everybody appears to be riveted on this latest installment of Xia’s lunacy and the girl seems to know it as he watches her face flush pinker and pinker under the attention. Somebody he can’t identify coughs into the silence and she lifts her chin, her heart shaped lips compressing. It's overall a rather cute effect, like a bunny trying to fluff up and look mean.

“We will be launching in four hours. All personnel not on ready duty are to be recalled.” All the attention snaps back to the Colonel as if the girl ceased to exist. “I want systems check online in two hours, final prep in three.”

“That’s… that’s not possible.” Morta pulls it together before everyone else, which is probably why he’s been first shift Commander for about as long as there’s been a first shift. “Launch requires twelve hours. Minimum.”

“It does not. Those twelve hours are for running equipment checks that we’ve already done and re-done during the re-cert tests. Maintenance 2 and 3 have signed off, Command has signed off, I have signed off. Orbital engines take three hours to cycle from a cold start. I’ll give you an extra hour for any hand holding you feel you can’t live without.”

Xia’s voice is light, fast and gives no opening.

“Colonel, this isn’t… this is insane.” It's Jebson this time, half risen from his chair with one hand flat on the table. “You can’t just order the ship to launch in four hours, we’ll blow ourselves up on the pad!” There are murmurs around the table, heads nodding in agreement. “Hell, half my crew is off-deck on rec leave, they won’t make it back in time.” He stares blankly at his datapad and wonders if he should be writing this down. Launch in four hours. Check next of kin is up to date. Call Tobi?

“They will be or we’ll lift without them and their pay will be docked for dereliction.” The Colonel tilts his head as Jebson starts to sputter. “I can leave you on the tarmac as well if you want to explain it to them in person? I’m sure your second will perform adequately in your stead.”

“Are you threatening me?”

“Not particularly. My threat displays are faster than this.” The Colonel tilts his head and the shadow of his cap covers his eyes. “This is not a request and this is not a discussion. I have my orders; take yours.”

“Cold start in four hours will break us apart,” Morta injects bluntly from the other side of the table. “I don’t care who ordered it, I don’t care if you’re saying the certification checks are enough, the strain…”

“... has been calculated and is within tolerance.”

“You’re going to get us killed. Colonel.”

The man smiles and it's not reaching his eyes. “Unlikely. I know my ships and this one will do as she was built to.” He looks around the table. “You will be given the rest of your orders once we are in high orbit. Gentlemen, I suggest you get started.”

The girl at his shoulder visibly hesitates and then leans to whisper urgently in his ear. Her dark hair, too long to be regulation anything no matter how lax the commander, falls to hide her face. His gaze lowers, his eyes half closing as if he’s actually listening. He murmurs something back as the side of his mouth curls and her face flushes again. She jerks back into position as if stung and shoves her hands behind her back, straightening painfully to a decent approximation of parade rest.

The near-smile falls off his face as he looks up again but his eyes gleam. It’s not a comforting combination.

“Why are you still here?” he says after a moment. “Your objections have been noted. Get started now.”


#2

Oh the noise I made when I realized I wasn't reading through Caleb's pov and this was the infamous (it was mentioned once but in a forum of 2 popularity has different thresholds) 3rd party pov!! Amazing. Beautiful. You just know she's there to be a doll and look pretty (she's so much more but that's classified info) for the new nepo-baby colonel.

Also, I already had this thought but reading this really convinced me that Caleb's adventures on his ship through the tunnel could work like battlestar galactica worked. Just. All the power struggles and group dynamics ♡
If one fancied that kind of plot, even him having a partner on board, something that he knows is never going to be romantic because he has no space in his body for it [this touches on a fan headcanon that Caleb would have partners to be knowledgeable enough when he finally got together with MC]
If one wanted to go the opposite way, him dodging flirty advances like bullets and is completely oblivious to how attractive everything he does is [this touches on the opposite headcanon that he's saving himself for MC and has never even given his first kiss yet]


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#3

political intrigue is the bane of my existence as I am not a twisty person by nature, but my god, we're going to try.

while i didn't have the Galactica in mind when i started figuring out my plot, that is bang on. absolutely. there are at least three four factions on this ship, and possibly more that are too small to count.

i... hadn't considered Caleb's v-card for some reason, actually. i will have to think on it more formally! oh, the horror.


#4

I have the problem of many ideas and not enough writing skills to make them happen lol

I just finished a complete rewatch of the entire saga (spin offs and prequels included) so I have to admit the connection might have come a bit too easy for me. But it's a ship in space, it checks out.

Yeah headcanons are split pretty evenly between the two options, and I'm not sure which one I enjoy more. They all have their pros in the context of a blue-balled stepbrother


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#5

He's probably Hua Cheng'd his situation - hasn't DONE anything but he's got three rooms dedicated to study materials.


#6

messed with the first bit a little, nothing major.




He gets confirmation of the last check in just as the running lights on the ceiling dim, pulse three times and flick to prep yellow. Second shift is accounted for even if parts of it are likely still in their civvies and beach sandals and running for their lock down positions but it’s at least one thing he can mark off. He’s going nearly as fast himself to keep up to his Commander, who’s moving as if the scurrying bodies in his way are going to get out of his way.

Which, of course, they do.

Three fast checkpoints later, including the last one that his Commander just hauls him past by dint of grabbing him by his bad arm and a gruff ‘he’s with me’, he’s stepping on to the command deck for the first and hopefully last time in his life.

He gulps and then immediately regrets it as he swallows wrong.

The circular space feels cavernous, the largest holoproj he’s ever seen outside of a concert on a dias right in the center, currently showing planetary curve and numbers moving too fast to be more than a blur from his position. Bridge crew are strapped into their chairs, fingers twitching as relays interpret command and syntax and pattern to throw nearly coherent light onto the black walls in displays a blind man could read from Chansia.

The Colonel is standing in front of the ‘proj, dwarfed by it with his arms crossed and his unmoving face awash with the frantic fireworks going off around him. His… whatever she is… is still at his elbow and her face at least looks like he feels. More than a little overwhelmed and trying to stare at nothing and everything all at the same time.

He plows into his Commander’s back who’s stopped at the bottom of the first stair upwards.

“Sorry!” he yelps, bouncing back. “Sorry, uh, sorry, sir.”

“Record everything,” the Commander snaps over his shoulder. “When this goes down, and it’s going to go down, I want enough data to hang party streamers from here to Linkon.”

“Sir, yes’sir. Recording.” He fumbles with his datapad, tapping out the shaky sequences. He has no idea if this is even going to work; at least one of the checkpoints on the way back out could probably fry him from fifty paces, let alone the circuitry he’s carrying.

When he looks up again, the Colonel is staring down at them.

“Get out.” The Colonel’s voice bounces off the hard walls, echoing like there’s more of him than there actually is. “Bridge crew only during escape sequence.”

“Not this time, Xia. When you fry the engines from this idiocy and turn this Fleetship into so much commemorative scrap, I want to stand at your court martial and tell them how you did it.”

One finger taps on his uniform sleeve. “Careful. You are one sentence away from an insubordination charge.”

“Won’t stick if we’re all dead, will it.”

There’s a long minute where the two of them just stare at each other. The Colonel is the one to flick his gaze away first. “Don’t interfere. And I suggest you find something to hold onto.”

He turns back to the holoprojection as if that settles the matter and it probably does. Looks like they’re not going to get kicked off the deck after all. The bridge crew haven’t even looked over from their cribs, still doing whatever it is they need to do to prep the ship for flight. The Commander takes that as some sort of permission to walk up the steps to the holo, the bulk of his shoulders cutting off some of the light streaming from it. After a second, he opts to stay here he is, at the bottom of the dias and hopefully out of line of sight of anybody important.

The girl at the Colonel’s side is looking a little pale and she shoots a glance up nervously, before her gaze sidles over behind the Colonel’s back to look at him instead. She smiles at him tentatively and her fingers at her side give a half wave before her expression falls away into an odd grimace. He understands and bobs his head to say so. Just us, he thinks as hard as he can. Trying not to be noticed. It’ll be okay.

She ducks her head as if she heard him. Her face is a nearly perfect heart and her eyes are refracting the lights in the room like she’s some sort of cotton candy display herself. Xia’s not bad looking if he’s going to be fair, but she seems a little out of his class. Maybe she’s rented by the hour? But if that’s the case, why is she on the command deck and in uniform on a fighting Fleetship? Unless it's one of those hidden in plain sight fictions that the brass chains turn a blind eye to. Some lowly sub-lieutenant who found a golden ticket to a better pay bracket.

Minutes tick by and he shifts from foot to foot, occasionally checking to make sure his data recordings haven’t cut off out of nowhere. The Colonel doesn’t so much as breathe as far as he can tell, just watching the light projections as they update.

Out of nowhere, the deck lights dim to half strength and one of the wall screens washes to a flat black with only a green CONFIRMATION on it and a string of numbers and letters that read like gibberish to him. Like a cascading waterfall, the rest of the bridge crew wipe their displays and its CONFIRMATION everywhere.

Colonel Xia drops his hands, fingers spread wide.

Every screen flashes red and COMMAND TRANSFERRED spreads like an inexorable wave before fading out into nothing. In front of him a series of inputs draw themselves in rainbow light. The running lights flip to launch orange.

“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?” the Commander barks with a sudden note of panic, nearly lost in the semi dark. “Command transferred?”

Fleetship engines are silent, powered by energy so pure it's more cautionary than real. But the ship is metal and alloy and latticed connection joints and it shudders as the drives come online. The holoproj clears and redraws itself to show the intended path from ground to orbit, numbers flickering bright and clear.

Xia doesn’t even look over, eyes trained on the digital controls. Circles contract and spin, locking in. Numbers shift and shift again, flicking blue to purple to violet. One of his hands comes up, fingers flexing.

“Xia.”

Two wall displays flicker up again. Numbers, letters, a percentage. Xia looks and then looks away. “Recalibrate.” The bridge crew touch nothing, hands flickering in the air as one number climbs, the other drops and the display hovering around Xia’s face cascades into a new formation. “Recalibrate,” Xia says again as his other hand rises. One of the wall displays flashes green and disappears. The other hovers then divides itself into information and a wireform of something that is not in the least recognizable.

“Xia, shut it down.”

“If I shut it down, we’re going to make the very large hole you’re so worried about.”

The remaining wall display fades out then, not even leaving an afterimage.

“Colonel,” says one of the bridge crew, impossible to tell who in the gloom. “We are holding stable at P-12. Ready for launch.”

“Ready to see the stars now?” Xia says, his voice impossibly light.

It’s a non-sequitur and it takes longer than it should before he realizes the question was for the woman at his shoulder. She hesitates, staring up at the side of his face but then steps forward as one of her hands creeps up to lock itself under his elbow. She leans then against his side suddenly, all but merging with his long black coat. Her head rests on his shoulder.

“Yeah. Yeah, Caleb. Let’s go.”

The smile that flashes across the Colonel’s face is crooked as lightning and nearly as fast. The visual display goes completely orange.

He’s never been on the command deck before, normally spends his launch minutes strapped into something that’s cushioned, conformed and much more stable than he is. He’s suddenly on his back, one with the floor as the hand of heaven impersonally puts him there. He scrabbles weakly on the slick black decking, feeling his organs rearrange.

The Commander is faring better, still on his feet and clutching the projector console but even as his eyesight blurs from the strain, he sees the man slowly go down on one knee.

He coughs and then inhales desperately, trying to get air into his lungs. He’s been through some rough launches and descents, but it’s never been anywhere close to this crushing before. An entire ocean is pressing down on him, implacable and inescapable.

The Colonel hasn’t shifted an inch. The holoprojector shows trajectory and the dot that must be them rising swiftly through the plot points. Something flashes red, a string of numbers hovering on the right, larger than the rest.

The Colonel frowns and his hands flex. On the floor, he wheezes as another heavy link of chain is added onto his chest.

“Recalibrate,” the Colonel snaps out. The numbers wobble orange, green and then fade out.

The Commander struggles to rise, gripping the sleek metal. The Colonel flicks his gaze over, a spark of blue light catching in his eye and he watches as the Commander slips again to his knee with a faint groan.

It’s him, he suddenly realizes. He’s doing it to us.

The woman seems to figure it out at the same time that he does.

“Caleb,” she hisses.

He makes a questioning noise, face forward as if his eyes are locked on the trajectory image.

“Caleb, stop it.” She tugs on his sleeve like a child.

He realizes then that she’s still standing as well, completely unaffected by the pull of home as they leave it.

The pressure eases to something bearable. He can only be grateful for a beautiful, breathable moment. So. So much better. He awkwardly sprawls to his side, fumbling for his dropped datapad.

“What the fuck do you think you’re playing at, Xia?” The Commander is red in the face, lurching back to his feet, having given up probably on any appearance of grace.

“Apologies, Commander Grist. There is a reason only bridge crew are on deck for launch while I am in command. I did,” Xia points out blandly after a moment, “warn you to brace.”

The Colonel must trigger something that he has no chance to see, as the tactical display swarms back to life. “Launch successful. Returning command to bridge.” The large wall displays come back up again in front of each of the crew, tracking unknown information. The holoprojector shows the ship dot in a chipper shade of green, small numbers flowing steadily.

“Command accepted,” comes the acknowledgement.

“Confirm clear."

“Clear confirmed.”

“C’mon,” the Colonel says, turning easily on his heel, tugging the woman around at the same time. His arm drapes over her shoulders as if there’s no other way they should be standing together, both of them taking the dias steps down to the floor. “Rec lounge has the best outside views.”


#7

"Maybe she’s rented by the hour?"
The way I choked

I am so into this 3rd POV because it's so close to my own experience of playing any CalebMC scene. Thirdwheeling hard and hating every second of it. What is MC's role in this? I'm almost inclined to think Caleb is doing all this flexing just because his little meimei asked to see the stars. He'll get a mutiny so fast lmao
Loved the use of his evol and how I also thought it was just the common consequence of launching into space at that speed but then realized with the characters that it was Caleb's doing. /chef's kiss.


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#8

I'm almost inclined to think Caleb is doing all this flexing just because his little meimei asked to see the stars.

noooo, he couldn't possibly squander Fleet resources like that. how irresponsible.

now i need to get the next bit started. any idea of where on a ship that size would be a big enough space for a decent sized fight? i was envisioning the rank and file all lined up IN rank and file so there'd be a ton of witnesses. i was thinking a hangar since we know smaller ships launch out of the bigger Fleetships but i'm open to suggestions. i haven't watched Galactica in forever and you just confessed you have so...


#9

The Battlestar Galactica had all the raptors where the maintenance crew could take care of them (one of the Hangar Decks), then they were sent into a sort of tube (launch tube) that spit the raptors out into space at a velocity. There were also "parking" zones (Landing Bay) for when the raptors needed to get back to Galactica, and these areas had lifts on the floor that would bring the raptors down into the maintenance area.

In the series the hangar deck was where important people who arrived on board were welcomed by the entire crew in rank and file, so it checks out!


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